The Turbulent World Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The Turbulent World

Rating: 4.9


Flying crow is cawing
On sky-field thundering plane
Dead names on earth list


-(11/5/2020 3: 36: 00 AM

Thursday, November 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: war
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(11/5/2020 3: 36: 00 AM)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 November 2020

Nice response to equally fantastic Senryu...5\\\

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 November 2020

No escape from all the human threats. Sad situations indeed.

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Anjandev Roy 05 November 2020

Dead names on earth list.......fantastic......thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 November 2020

good time must come not by the waiting but by the welfare doing liked ur lovely comments tell all idiots in waiting do something life is a long qqqqqqqqq and all are clueless tooooooooooooooooooooo except friend meeeeee and uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

The Flocks Of Crows In Desolation Trees Are Cawing the flocks of crows in desolation trees are black spectre cawing chanting death lists of dead soldiers on worthless battlefields are they mocking misguided bravery pointless dead or warning sky path peace is the way to walk Inspired by the poem 'The Turbulent World' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE. Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 November 2020

A poignant short write. A great depiction of war in just three brilliant lines. Full of images. Five Stars! ! ! !

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Valsa George 08 November 2020

There is cacophonous sound, the threat of wars and approaching death in the present day world. Over all there is an air of turbulence! A short little write mirroring the contemporary times!

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

the flocks of crows in desolation trees are cawing, chanting death lists of dead soldiers on worthless battlefields, are they mocking misguided bravery pointless or warning sky path peace is the way to walk?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 November 2020

A beautifully conveyed poem. Truly exceptional. 5 stars*****

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