The Wind Of Fate Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Wind Of Fate

Rating: 4.7


He manipulates the wheel of life
Masterly woven his past
Carefully paints the present
Collects tons of gold for his future.

The Wind of Fate forced its way
Handed him a Scroll
A verdict....
A World of Nothingness.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, November 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 15 November 2020

A well thought poem....... Truly astonishing......5 stars*****

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Anjandev Roy 15 November 2020

This is brilliantly composed.......thanks for sharing........anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 14 November 2020

Absolutely perfext Rose Marie! 5stars!

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2020

The Wind of Fate would be able to blow away any iron rimmed authoritarian wheel... Nice poem, Rose. The imagery brings in a powerful message. Five stars

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2020

Judgement! ! Ways of mankind on earth; With our works. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 October 2022

the brilliance of this poem cannot be measured Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2022

This is an outstanding work......enjoyed it....thank u so much...

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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2022

Very powerfully penned with deep conviction. The verdict of 'Dust To Dust`is an inescapable, existential reality that bears eloquent testimony to the maxim, 'Vanity Upon Vanity'. Thanks for your immense contribution to The Poemhunter Family.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2022

A great poem dear poetess. There is an illustrious poetic depth in this prudent work. My great pleasure in revisiting this brilliant poem!

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Nabakishore Dash 12 October 2021

Excellent expression

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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