Their Sky And My Kite Poem by M D Dinesh Nair

Their Sky And My Kite

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Beneath the heights of their skies
Flying along the tracks of floating clouds wild
My kite flies not caring for
My words of caution ever.
Beneath my kite, upon a heath of dreams
My limbs stand and shiver.
Their skies widen in shape
But my kite knows not it.

When the giant winds turn furious
And clash with the clouds,
When their skies emit fire of lightning
And roar through thunder
My kite sways and swings
As if every sky were thus.

Even then my hand tries to hold
The far tip of its thread very fragile.
Their skies send shivers to my spines
And the stars laugh at me oten
As I stand on the heath of fancies and fads.
Beneath the horizons of their empire newly spread

Now flies my kite with a direction
Unknown or undesired to have been known by me
And he pulls me up into their skies
For then too I hold the tip of his thread!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

My kite flies in their sky with thread in my hand. Nice image. We hang on to the thread of life.

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 December 2013

My kite of dreams flying high in the sky though the control was in my hand but the natures strong winds and thundering threat to my fragile control. Now kite flying to unknown direction and am to flying along with it........................Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Aswath Raman 29 December 2013

Imagination at its best. I believe this poem can be interpretted more than two ways and with your magical hands what not is possible? I wish you all the success while exploring the turbulant sky, and am least worried of you letting go of that thread. For sure, this must be once in a life time chance and you will not let it go sir! Bring me a lightning bolt will you?

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Rubab Atwal 30 December 2013

a beautiful poem..very engrossing.I feel like reading over and over again

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2015

I don't know how to fly on my own but his faith on me lifts up every time to the height beyond skies..........Wonderful poem.10+++++

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 12 January 2014

Kite really as our fate.Very deep and unique poem.jk

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Shahzia Batool 01 January 2014

A very different and deep poem of life which inspired me to think my own way... thank you so much for that inspiration Dinesh ji!

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Valsa George 31 December 2013

Hold fast to the thread of your kite! Let it fly aloft, inspite of the wind being adverse and the sky hostile. Wonderful imagination! I see in this, the agility and strength of a stallion, galloping away to some far away well charted destination! Excellent write! !

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Valerie Dohren 30 December 2013

Greatly inspired poem Dinesh - a flight of fancy. Well done.

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