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Then And There

Rating: 4.3

There, I would be
If I some day
I've some words
Then I would say...

Tuesday, August 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: almighty
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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2020

Then you surely have some words Because u wrote few lines already hahaaa Speak your mind Dont use words Another way also can... Yeah i get it...telepathy..blink blink

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Susan Williams 19 August 2020

Part 2 [sorry, just had to- my deplorable sense of humor at work]. I don't know what I would say, probably be prostrate on the ground and wanting to say everything in my heart and soul and wanting to say nothing all at the same time. I like how this poem leads us to think for ourselves- -10+++++

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Susan Williams 19 August 2020

The power of suspense in vivid action, my friend. What I have to say about this is...

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Mj Lemon 16 August 2020

Brilliant, Ali...There is always some place to be, based on a wish, and a desire to reveal something about ourselves. Terrific verse, very thought provoking.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 August 2020

Then Oneness Hidden in own self and There's outburst

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