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Tear

Rating: 4.6

Ageless days
On the surface
When it stays
.
Sunset hides
Down the cheek
When it slides
.
Shh.. hope sleeps
Eyes can't help

Heart weeps weeps
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Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tears
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 05 December 2016

Hope sleeps, heart weeps! I wish that hope would resist hopelessness, for prosperity's sake.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

Great rhyme scheme and creatively done. Poetically soulful. Kudos. I'm sure I have read from u before, nice to do so again. Pls do comment my ashurah poem, my latest.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2016

why i wonder kabhee kabhee hum bhee soachtey hain humaree nagamein kyu koie padta naheen urdu hamey aatee nahee English aap koe naheen

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Valsa George 08 October 2016

I agree with Nosheen in her observation... Hope sleeps and heart weeps! ! Poignant write!

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Nosheen Irfan 04 October 2016

A very heart-touching poem. Hope sleeps Eyes can't help Heart weeps weeps. Beautiful expression. A true depiction of life this poem is. A succinct gem.

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Mj Lemon 27 November 2019

I've just reread the poem with the meaning on 'tear' placed on the idea of pulling apart, ripping. The sun sliding down the cheek has or had found an opening...New layers of meaning reveal themselves. A very complex work, Ali. Magnificent.

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Unwritten Soul 03 June 2019

Even if the ocean is your tears, you have land my dear to still make things green and great... Dont cry for more, but if u want to just cry... Still u have to make sure the land you have a place for u to walk and success. Success means, what make your life beautiful according to u.

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Mj Lemon 08 April 2017

A very beautiful work. Hope is merely asleep, but it remains present. And the vivid imagery is magnificent.

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2017

Short and beautiful poem- - touches heart with its few words.

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Susan Williams 28 December 2016

It's odd sometimes how one line will reach out from a poem and grap me by my throat and say look at me- really look at me. That is what this line said to me- - - - - - Shh.. hope sleeps

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