Tho You See Poem by Asif Baloch

Tho You See

Rating: 5.0


Tho you see
As I fall
Love to be
As fate destined
Weeping and hurting
With unseen pain
Lashes of whips put by
Unknown hands
Blood is dripping
From life long scars
Hurting and tearing
My soul apart
Poison of loneliness
Runs in my veins
I want to grab heart
And rip it of my chest

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 05 October 2008

nice..very much full of pathos...keep writing what you feel.

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Gargi Saha 05 October 2008

a very heartfelt sorrowful poem. u get 10++

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Reshma Ramesh 05 October 2008

perfect...........10! !

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Koyel Mitra 05 October 2008

The pangs of love beautifully expressed.A 10!

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Evaughn Gray 05 October 2008

wow, i love the way you described the pain and what you wanted to about it, to solve the problem.. it was marvelous 10! ~Hazel G.E

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A very emotional miserable poem. Great job.

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Anjali Sinha 15 October 2008

ufff! ! ! ! poision of loneliness grips my heart too -- I can see the pathos too very touching- 10+ love anjali

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Emo Seb 15 October 2008

LOVE IT! ! ! ! keep writing!

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Mark Nwagwu 15 October 2008

heart out of chest is no longer heart 'cause it does not beat - that beat is important, it is the beat we all dance to and the music comes from the heart too.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 October 2008

you seem to be very sad now. sometrhing is on your mind that is bothering you and due to that these verses are flowing out of your wounded heart.

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