~ Thunder Harp ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Mind composes what the heart sings and the voice that strikes as compelling very often vanishes in oblivion - like life. Thanks for sharing. It has made me quizzical.

By being succinct you have tuned into the inner voice which leads you on a journey of the heart and soul. Great poem!

thanks for inviting me to read this one... there is no regret...

Music of life can come in many melodies and via varieties of instruments; choices is yours. Sometimes no answer for every question given but what type of answer should comes depands on your choice. Ear, eyes and heart with real aim shall give you God's blessing answer but not everyone can listen to His words thru faith Order. We should direct our life to the right path and be a human with compassion, in order to reach real meaning of life's journey. Well done.

to aim where to go and find out why to go are our song to dedicate to Him

Good work poet! I liked these lines especially 'Goes my being Amidst distant clouds Into deep oblivion Where runs Knows who? '

It's beautiful cloudgazing. No need for me to creep into 'knowledge at all so as to enjoy it.

Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation..more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing.

Complicated, but so simple. Your words do not hide the truth, only promote it. What is inside. Thanks for sharing.... Marina Gasbey...

Nice reflection of the mind beyond the Nirvana there should be some understanding,10+