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Swimming Fish

Rating: 5.0

Clear glass like water
In it the swimming fish
Like the ideas........
Sometimes, it shows its beauty
And sometimes, its thorns.....
Sometimes, it goes into the abyss
And sometimes, it remains afloat.....
No wonder, no one can predict
Where this fish will go..?

June Smithster 06 January 2012

cadence rhythum flow you write this poem like the fish moving there

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 January 2012

Great poem, i real liked it.

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Dave Walker 05 January 2012

A very good poem. Really good.

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 January 2012

nice comparison. simple but beautiful

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Silverinna Annastasia 17 March 2012

I quite like this one, Binish, because we are all little fish in a giant world of water.

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yellowbell alamanda 17 January 2012

NICE! we are all fish swimming in the wide ocean of life..we just have to swim on as they said flying. :) thanks for sharing Binish!

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Tanyarose Poemsandwoes 13 January 2012

very cute, to the point, yet with depth. Well done!

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Claudia Krizay 09 January 2012

Very good poem! -makes me wonder too where this fish will go...

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

dear Poet, this's a wonderful poem! ! ! ! we can see the abyss if we drown in it / Beautiful penning..really a great poem! ! !

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