Clear glass like water
In it the swimming fish
Like the ideas........
Sometimes, it shows its beauty
And sometimes, its thorns.....
Sometimes, it goes into the abyss
And sometimes, it remains afloat.....
No wonder, no one can predict
Where this fish will go..?
cadence rhythum flow you write this poem like the fish moving there
I quite like this one, Binish, because we are all little fish in a giant world of water.
NICE! we are all fish swimming in the wide ocean of life..we just have to swim on as they said flying. :) thanks for sharing Binish!
very cute, to the point, yet with depth. Well done!
Very good poem! -makes me wonder too where this fish will go...
dear Poet, this's a wonderful poem! ! ! ! we can see the abyss if we drown in it / Beautiful penning..really a great poem! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice comparison. simple but beautiful