Just past the ordinary,
The road becomes obscure
where space defies
Three dimensions
And time surpasses four...
My presence is an illusion
Constructed by the eyes
To make my person visible
While I remain inside...
Energy That is transparent
Creates change with response,
Elicited from the living,
Dialogue of the spirit...
Transformation bears momentum,
Focusing for a while,
Lingering on something
Made substantial
In the spotlight...
Then, flickering in memory
After the light has passed,
Conviction throughout existence
Stays the essence of a goal...
time and space is very important in handling burdens in life... it is the great instrument also on how to reach the goal...ur poem is nice romeo...congrats for the top rate...congratulations...
Beautiful and inspiring poem! This poem is fantastic in so many ways but I think my favourite line is 'Conviction throughout existence Stays the essence of a goal... '. I completely agree with this poem - we all need goals to have a purpose and meaning in this life.
Time and space are the playground of the soul... Very nice poem...
life, not bound by the cage of the body, or the limits of our conceptions... well written poem, like it very much!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
congratulation for this poem too, my friend. take care. may god bless you. sincere wishes - ramesh rai