Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 54,655 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

Time's Flight - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Together we felt the caresses of the breeze
Together we heard the song of the rain
Drowned in love’s ecstasy
We had a vision of the paradise

Hands clasped, hearts entwined
Beauty abundant, love ripe
A pretty picture we made
Crowned in the glory of affection abound

Beauty, delight and love mingled
Petrified us into submission
Trees danced, wind whistled
Above our bowed heads

We lived and lived in the heart of love
Drank from its well, rested in its lap
The air was thick with the spring of life
Blossoms were all around

Moments passed, feelings subsided
A fleeting image it all became
Vanished from the sight and mind both
A victim of time’s inscrutable flight.

Topic(s) of this poem: loss, love


Comments about Time's Flight by Nosheen Irfan

  • Daniel Brick (5/17/2017 1:47:00 PM)


    In the last stasnza this vision of a perfectly balanced love has vanished in TIME'S FLIGHT, B-U-T in the fourth stanza you wrote: WE LIVED AND LIVED IN THE HEART OF LOVE and the whole stanza graced us with the fulfillment of love-hopes. Mymind jumped back to the fourth stanza after reading the last one. And guess what? TIME had circled around and his flight became a homecoming and the two faithful lovers were once again embracing IN THE HEART OF LOVE! Isn't that a wonderful change of events? (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/26/2016 10:59:00 AM)

    AWESOME
    Time is the culprit and a cruel passerby, it sucks and drain everything from us and then laugh....A thought provoking poem, As usual 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (11/30/2016 3:11:00 AM)

    Time's Flight
    The past remains alive when it has been. Love is forever in mind, even when it's lost.+++10


    Robert
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/4/2016 3:53:00 AM)


    In the heart of love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2016 3:24:00 AM)


    fleeting clock
    on the wall
    tells story
    of them all
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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