To The Breeze Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Awesome request......10+++++ Hawaon pe likhkar ye paigha aaya hai aaj kisi ka dur se salam aaya hai Kyun ruk gayi hai hawa, zara zor se chal Hamari Nosheenji ka aaj tere liye farmaan aaya hai....

Hi Nosheen, Again a very nice poem from Nosheen. The parched land gasps The golden grass moans A little of your touch Can heal the soul The choice of a few simple ordinary words make the poem extraordinary: little of your touch, heal the soul', soothing murmur etc. Enjoyed reading the poem. Congrats and keep writing.

Wonderfully written, Nosheen. A supplication to the breeze to caress your skin and cool the day

A magnificent ode to breeze! Loved the way you have composed this little piece of poetry!

This little piece is a song that is the breeze that rustles the mind's foliage. Thanks for sharing.

A little of your touch! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

A LITTLE OF YOUR TOUCH CAN HEAL THE SOUL: you link the worldly with the spiritual, but in an understated manner I find very persuasive. It's not in the coded language of the SUFI poets but your poem has that larger dimension. The intimacy between you and the breeze shows that connection between us humans and Nature, we are DEEPLY INTERFUSED in Nature as Wordsworth put it. Even the extreme heat of summer responds to us with a refreshing breeze.

I really like that poem, it is good.