Titanic Poem by Valerie Dohren

Titanic

Rating: 4.5


100th Anniversary Poem

(Considered to be the greatest maritime
disaster of all time - 14/15 April 1912)


Fair maiden of the ocean deep (1)
This mighty vessel lost to sleep
A jewel `neath a moonless sky
`Twas fate that she so soon would die

Against the ice her doom was sealed (2)
Just ten percent of it revealed
As close against its buried side
With grace and dignity to glide

The greater part was hid below (3)
(An icy mass of frozen snow)
A jagg`ed fortress `neath the sea
A dark, unseen catastrophe

Her belly slashed, then set to die, (4)
(Upon the ocean bed to lie)
Into her hull the ocean gushed
People and objects swirled and crushed

But no-one listened to her cries (5)
Nor even to her calls did rise
And none aknowledged all her flares
Nor sought to answer all her prayers

Two hours and forty minutes passed (6)
With all her charges holding fast
Just twenty lifeboats, not yet filled,
(And fifteen hundred hearts were stilled)

Water seeping into her heart (7)
Tearing her very soul apart
Invincible of White Star Line
She lurched, she groaned, with severed spine

O`er time a saviour ship arrived (8)
To aid the ones who had survived
To take them thus into her care
A ship of safety anchored there

But in the darkness of the night (9)
In ice-cold waters void of light
Bounced scattered souls upon the waves
Descending to their watery graves

Then all the while, when hope was gone, (10)
In calm repose the band played on
(`Nearer My God To Thee, ` they think)
As, with grace, she started to sink

One hundred years her memory (11)
Still lingers `neath the raging sea
Within the hearts of all bereft
Of those whose lives have long since left

They said that sink she never could (12)
But oh, dear God, she surely would!
Invincible of White Star Line
She lurched, she groaned, with severed spine

And though one century has passed
Lost souls in memories are cast
Their eyes as stars in heaven dwell
Reflected in the ocean`s swell

With tales of life and secrets kept
Of those who loved and those who wept
Your stories you will never tell
Farewell, my friends, farewell, farewell...

The sun upon the shimm`ring sea
Will ever your companion be

-

Verse 1:
10 April 1912 - depart Southampton bound for
New York - North Atlantic crossing.

Verse 2:
14 April 1912 at 11: 40 pm she hit an iceberg -
she was travelling too fast and had taken a
more northerly route than was appropriate for
that time of year.

Verse 3:
The iceberg lay just 1000 yards ahead but was
not seen due to it being a moonless night.

Verse 4:
She was hit starboard bow - many assumed it
was just a glancing blow which she had
survived.

Verse 5:
The crew of The Californian went to bed as it
was thought that she was having a party.

Verse 6:
She held only 20 lifeboats instead of the 64
which she was designed to carry - just one-
third of her capacity, and these were not
filled.

Verse 7:
Five compartments were flooded (only four and
she would have survived) , and just before
2-20 am on 15 April she broke up as she sank.

Verse 8:
RMS Carpathia responded to her cries for
help and proceeded to rescue lifeboat
survivors.

Verse 9:
1500 lives were lost.
Approximate survival rates:
1st class - 62%
2nd class - 41%
3rd class - 25%
Women - 75%
Children - 50%
Men - 20%
3 out of 12 dogs survived.

Verse 10:
As they did on deck - all members of the
band were lost, and subsequently were
regarded as heroes.

Verse 11:
1912-2012: 100th Anniversary Poem.

Verse 12:
Captain Edward John Smith went down with
his ship - his body was never recovered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

Oh my. Lovely. A beautiful poem for a very sad occasion. Great job, Val.

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Carolyn Ford Witt 11 May 2012

The Two of us together have a terrific history lesson. LOL Very nice. Carolyn Ford Witt of Titanic's demise

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Dave Walker 14 April 2012

A truly fantastic poem, and a fantastic tribute. Very well written. A truly amazing write.

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Doug Bentley 15 April 2012

i think you've anchored the legend to this poem.

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Heather Wilson 14 April 2012

Oh, Val, that really was The BIg One, what a write, what work, what effort, I can`t even begin to think how long that took you to research and write, A wonderful piece, so sad , I`m sure we will all shed a tear today reading it, Just thank you is all I have left to say.

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2012

What a wonderful way to tell this story; you have me spellbound. Amazing.

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Robert Beck 28 October 2012

You pieced together a perfect image in your wonderful poem. This is just more proof of your brilliant talent.

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Vincent Kuo 17 May 2012

Absolutely astonishing poem. I am completely absorbed! Thank you so much!

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Godfrey Morris 16 May 2012

Dear Madam, I admire your style greatly. I have read some of your poems, But surely this ranks above all. This could easilly be considered someday as the greatest poem ever written. This is verse becoming alive.

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Sylva Portoian 14 May 2012

Your poem about Titanic... Should enter Poetic Land... Like Rumi’s...and many others…you admire and praise... I always wanted poeting...about Titanic... But we had worst man-made tragedy than that We lost 1.5 million innocent lives... During the same dates (1894-1923) Those who never killed a bird... Including my grandfather and his kin...peers...and more We lost not only lives... Lands, gold, bank accounts, Churches, Fortresses, which belonged to us before Christ We were tortured...cursed... Still continues without any help No race had what we had Still our genocide not recognized…Yet By people who think have a deep ‘Christian Faith’...! Still 2 million Armenians are 'Turkified' (Lost their Faiths, cultures, name…surnames…! ! !) In their Armenian Highland (Anatolia) And are unable to open their mouths...! We are discovering day by day through the Internets…! Sylva-MD-Poetry Written instantly

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