Time Poem by Valerie Dohren

Time

Rating: 4.6


Bang …..

Tick, tock, tick tock,

seconds
minutes
hours

days pass

seasons turn

years
portions of existence

melt
into eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 09 August 2013

Life is giving a portion of time to everyone as the cycle of life continues. Powerful with great impact!

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David Wood 10 August 2013

Great minds think alike! !

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Mohabeer Beeharry 10 August 2013

That's the only thing we cannot stop, time. It comes and it goes, it goes. Beautiful. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Kevin Halls 10 August 2013

The meaning of life summed up in a short poem Hawkins wrote a huge book and the majority of us still are none the wiser! BANG, tick tock, seasons turn, eternity, and that's it. Brilliant Val.

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Shahzia Batool 10 August 2013

An alive poem with a vast canvas that touches the eternity...! ! !

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Dee Corpolongo 27 August 2013

How very short and simple! Just as time flies by, you captured it right here in these words! Isn't it funny how when we are young, time seems to take forever, yet as we age it just flies by! In the blink of an eye! Loved this!

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Wonderful poem..Just in counts we are in eternity, time is flying so fast.. Very true..good message. Loved it. ,

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 12 August 2013

A very active, fast moving poem - gripping lines

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

Time ticks. Seasons and eons pass into eternity. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Sina Farajzadeh 12 August 2013

Short and nice. Thanks for sharing...

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