Bang …..
Tick, tock, tick tock,
seconds
minutes
hours
days pass
seasons turn
years
portions of existence
melt
into eternity
That's the only thing we cannot stop, time. It comes and it goes, it goes. Beautiful. Mohabeer Beeharry
The meaning of life summed up in a short poem Hawkins wrote a huge book and the majority of us still are none the wiser! BANG, tick tock, seasons turn, eternity, and that's it. Brilliant Val.
An alive poem with a vast canvas that touches the eternity...! ! !
How very short and simple! Just as time flies by, you captured it right here in these words! Isn't it funny how when we are young, time seems to take forever, yet as we age it just flies by! In the blink of an eye! Loved this!
Wonderful poem..Just in counts we are in eternity, time is flying so fast.. Very true..good message. Loved it. ,
Time ticks. Seasons and eons pass into eternity. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Life is giving a portion of time to everyone as the cycle of life continues. Powerful with great impact!