To Be... Poem by Esther Leclerc

To Be...

Rating: 5.0


To be known, to be understood
to still be wanted in that knowledge and truth
How does that feel? ... Is it good? ...
It must be real, this yearning grasps me in every mood.

To be heard, to be seen
to be held close through life and in my dreams
What is that like? ... Is it warm? ...
I think it happens, I read some words so long ago.

To be loved, to be forgiven
to be myself yet One with you this side of heaven
but I know better... it cannot be...
There is no room in your self-ish soul for me.

To be alone, to be without a home in
the heart and arms of him I know so well
I tell myself: it's all right... it's okay...
you've never known love any other way.

(2.26.06 - - Be well, Little Spirit, for the end is not yet writ.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Russell 28 February 2006

Esther, I love logging on to poem hunter and finding you've written a new poem - and you haven't disappointed me with this one. A well earned 10. Hugs Anna xxx

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Ernestine Northover 01 March 2006

That is a beautiful write Esther. I loved it so much. A lovely read. The rhythm was unusual but worked brilliantly. Congrats for this one. A 10 is definitely on the cards. Love Ernestine XXX

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Moya Levy 01 March 2006

I like this Esther, and agree with Ernestine, the flow's different but great! Moyaxx

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Myra Jefferson 04 March 2006

Excellent poem! Captures the feelings very well for me. I know what it is to be.

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Duncan Wyllie 23 March 2006

Something very warm about this.A carpet of words so soft.Love Duncan

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Barry Van Allen 10 March 2007

Esther, I did enjoy this. I wonder where the other two are? (1) Or not to be? (2) That is the Question ? B.V.A.

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Stephen Mills 19 February 2007

This poem has a great rhythm and drive behind it, Well done..

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R H 09 September 2006

Love how you have threaded a degree of acceptance into this piece of reflective contemplation. Justine

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Lesa K 28 July 2006

This is truly one of the better poems I have read. I give it a 10.

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Alison Cassidy 26 June 2006

Esther, I love the structure of this piece and its rhythmical flow. It's good on the ear. As for the content... I'm curious? What melancholy and yet what acceptance lie in your words. Fine piece. lotsaluv, Allie

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