To The Sun (A Haiku) Poem by Esther Leclerc

To The Sun (A Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


The noonday sun
holds court in our galaxy
while earth spins her wheels


(5.24.06 - my first haiku)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 24 May 2006

Very good First try keep - em comin dave xxx

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Danny Reynolds 24 May 2006

Go on yirsell Esther. An a big Haiku the noo, too. Danny (Also recently converted)

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Charles M Moore 24 May 2006

I like this, A thought provoking piece.

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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2006

Congratulations. This is great Haiku. Very clever. Regards, Alison

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

Top class, very inspirational, lots of creative thinking here, Thankyou Esther you write beautifully Love Duncan x

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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2007

I was looking through your poems, when I came upon this small treasure. What a lovely first. It is always satisfying to the soul to accomplish something one has never done before. Take care. Love, Sandra

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R H 24 February 2007

I love this Est. Evocative and contemplative. Justine

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Robert Howard 16 August 2006

According to the paper this morning our Earth has three more planets to pal around with: Ceres, Xena (home of the Warrior Princess?) and Charon. Isn't it grand?

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Duncan Wyllie 23 July 2006

Left spinning in awe, a lovely wordsmith is you **ESTHER** love duncan X

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Chuck Audette 05 June 2006

Beautiful. But is a haiku strictly 5 syllables,7, then 5? Or just a wonderful idea expressed without excess? (in which case you have definitely succeeded) .- chuck

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