Esther Leclerc

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To The Sun (A Haiku) - Poem by Esther Leclerc

The noonday sun
holds court in our galaxy
while earth spins her wheels

(5.24.06 - my first haiku)

Comments about To The Sun (A Haiku) by Esther Leclerc

  • (4/19/2007 4:52:00 AM)

    I was looking through your poems, when I came upon this small treasure. What a lovely first. It is always satisfying to the soul to accomplish something one has never done before. Take care.


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  • (2/24/2007 4:05:00 PM)

    I love this Est. Evocative and contemplative. Justine (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2006 12:56:00 PM)

    According to the paper this morning our Earth has three more planets to pal around with:
    Ceres, Xena (home of the Warrior Princess?) and Charon. Isn't it grand?
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  • (7/23/2006 7:49:00 AM)

    Left spinning in awe, a lovely wordsmith is you **ESTHER**
    love duncan X
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  • (6/5/2006 1:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful. But is a haiku strictly 5 syllables,7, then 5? Or just a wonderful idea expressed without excess? (in which case you have definitely succeeded) .- chuck (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (6/4/2006 8:00:00 PM)

    Esther, I've never written Haiku, but when I do, I hope it's even half as profound as yours... awesome! !
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  • (6/2/2006 9:18:00 AM)

    So now I have to add mistress of Language to your already many talents, do I? Pah! Share some will ya? !
    Anna xxx
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  • (5/30/2006 1:37:00 PM)

    Top class, very inspirational, lots of creative thinking here, Thankyou Esther you write beautifully
    Love Duncan x
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  • (5/24/2006 11:32:00 PM)

    Congratulations. This is great Haiku. Very clever. Regards, Alison (Report) Reply

  • Charles M Moore (5/24/2006 7:28:00 PM)

    I like this, A thought provoking piece. (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 4:21:00 PM)

    Go on yirsell Esther. An a big Haiku the noo, too.
    Danny (Also recently converted)
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  • (5/24/2006 3:55:00 PM)

    Very good First try keep - em comin dave xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 24, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 25, 2006

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