Satan and Adam
Sinner
Struggle
Guiltiness, the consequence
Who is the winner?
Ethereal melodies of life
For a while
Then a bang
End of the trial
Help people
Release your soul
Who will blame you?
Parole
(2008/11/24)
a nice poem though i don`t agree with it completely.anyway, i think it depends on adam ''the man'' some can prevail and others lose.
very unique but i like that about it.. Great work Krista
Yes, the Satan a guilty angel too, all the same it will be good if you do not identify Eve to them... Very cleverly and mysteriously! 10... Tsira
short and to the point.......in the face........well penned
This is so clever. I agree, life seems so wonderful and carefree when we are young, then suddenly someone pressed the 'fast forward' button. We realise what we have always suspected, there is a bill to pay at the end...
So beautiful poem. Really I enjoyed those nicest words and expressions.
A capturing poem an' thought provoking my friend! Thanks for sharing! Best regards, 10 Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well its a different poem with a different subject. nice.