Oh gently passing night
Can't you lull me to sleep?
How long can I keep
Counting the sheep?
It was a busy bustling day
And I savoured each moment
Heeding the lesson life has taught
To live in the present
Now I need to gather my strength
To meet a new day
So, cut my stream of thoughts
Let sleep come my way
You can bless me with a dream
Of a gently flowing stream
In a lush green valley
Where a thousand flowers sway
Gathering self strength through self assessment with fragrance of thousand of flowers matter a lot. At night subtle vibrations are well caught during rest in silence. Brilliant perceptional poem is excellently penned...10
Exquisitely written.U will definitely get your good sleep every day Madam.
How long can I keep Counting the sheep? A very impressive poem, abut falling asleep, so brillantly worded, dear Poetess! 5 Stars full
Great to learn from the lesson that life has taught us in specific time. A wonderful poem! !
Another great poem with a simple and straight appeal, and sleep is something that puts you in touch with your deep
You can bless me with a dream Of a gently flowing stream In a lush green valley Where a thousand flowers sway..............What a beauty of words and lines!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely poem and nicely presented. I could see myself counting sheeps when sleep is so elusive.
Thank you, Rose! Much obliged!