Twin Cinquains - Anger/ Fear Poem by Valsa George

Twin Cinquains - Anger/ Fear

Rating: 5.0


ANGER
An acid
If bottled tight
Is sure to explode
Pernicious

FEAR
Hiding serpents
In unlit corners
Kissing with hungry lips
Poison

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 03 November 2013

I am angry that my fears are there to stay...

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Kee Thampi 03 November 2013

a chemistry of fear to anger...lovable stytle ANGER An acid If bottled tight Is sure to explode Pernicious

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 November 2013

Keep the cap lose and don't reach invisible corners. Avoid danger by all means. Nice warnings. Thank you.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

a great surrealist design woven for these primal elements! much loved it.

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Noreen Carden 04 November 2013

Wow Valsa you have a wonderful way with words well done great poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2020

Regarding anger and fear it has been so impressively delineated. Anger is explode Pernicious. Beautiful poem. Visited time and again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 February 2020

Brilliant.... You have so neatly comprehended these two highly sensitive facets in their absolute accuracy! Liked your prudent perception dear madam...10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

Anger is just like an acid. This burns and engulfs entire mankind and no humanity is seen. This provokes thought like fear. You have also amazingly expressed fear here. Fear and anger are vices. We should avoid these. A brilliant twin poem is well penned...10

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Bri Edwards 18 December 2013

per·ni·cious p?r'niSH?s/ adjective adjective: pernicious 1. having a harmful effect, esp. in a gradual or subtle way. the pernicious influences of the mass media synonyms: harmful, damaging, destructive, injurious, hurtful, detrimental, deleterious, dangerous, adverse, inimical, unhealthy, unfavorable, bad, evil, baleful, wicked, malign, malevolent, malignant, noxious, poisonous, corrupting; More literarymaleficent a pernicious influence on society antonyms: beneficial Origin More late Middle English: from Latin perniciosus ‘destructive, ’ from pernicies ‘ruin, ’ based on nex, nec- ‘death.’ Translate pernicious to Use over time for: pernicious VALSA, HERE IS MY LATEST MISCHIEF! i would complain about your use of pernicious (privately complain of course) BUT i guess i really am not entitled to complain since the definition says esp./especially, NOT always, in a gradual or subtle way. so i'll be lenient....this time! but watch your step! ! ! ! :) bri YIKES! i had better carry a flashlight/torch and watch those unlit corners! ! ! ! i'll send this to MyPoemList, partly because i doubt i have any......what are they called? ......cinquains there. no choo choo trains either.

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Patricia Grantham 18 November 2013

Anger plus fear equals self destruction. Try to eradicate both and you will survive its elements. A good explanation of both in your Twin Cinquains.

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