Unabated Dreams Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Unabated Dreams

Rating: 5.0


These unabated dreams,
In the silent shores of sleep,
Where those glow worms
That emits perpetual light
Unto their end live,
No others enter or leave

No one, except you and me,
Roams around that free
These love rich mounts and valleys
That ever guards our feels

Ask the moon shy, half-hiding,
She will tell those sweet tales
For she has remained to watch us
With hearty happy smiles

Let these dreams never end,
Never end these buoyant nights
Let the dawn and her light wait
Until we say bye, my dear mate!

7th April 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 12 December 2008

pictures how dreams take u to infinite pleasures yet reality strikes and dreams end in the dawn of life..yet keep dreaming and writing for your love...sweet poem..hope you read one favorite poem of mine 'the mourners'..thanks

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Blue angel Florida 05 December 2008

The Hope of forever light into Unabated Dreams.

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Karla Bardanza 04 December 2008

Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You are a great poet! Karla Bardanza

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Neha Aradhye 01 December 2008

Ask the moon shy half hiding She will tell those sweet tales For she has remained watching Us with hearty happy smile! Let these dreams never end Never end these buoyant nights Let the dawn and her light wait Until we say bye, my dear mate... - truly fantastic.. ;)

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Madison Yeater 29 November 2008

this is a great poem. it touched my heart. nicely done.

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Mandara Pookal 07 November 2009

I have read and admired with astonishment most of your poems and I can proudly say that I am your fan. This poem is sensual and very sharing and gives off its fragrance that is deepened by feel and desire. regards, mandara

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Ranjit Ravindran 06 November 2009

The intrusion of glow worms are always welcome... The moon is naughty, plays hide & seek, changes forms, yet gives a comforting feel. Let all those dreams come true & many more happy dreams rise in you.

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Wendy Bureau 23 March 2009

A lovely read Kesav.. Imagery and flow perfect.. My admiration and 10 Wendy :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 February 2009

a lovely amdience to meet the lover..with the moon to look over.. and the sun to wait under..see i become poetic when i comment on yours..lovely sir...10

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 23 December 2008

Considering the fact that you come from a field alien to literature, the way you have woven this poetic fabric with romantic strands of thought, is no mean achievement! Carry on, Mr. Easwaran. My best wishes.

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