Unbundle Poem by Lasaad Tayeb

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Rating: 5.0


Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade,
live in realm of light and shade.
Who are you? Who am I? mom!
Are we the far-off orb charm?
Are we the rivers close by?
We are earth, water, and sky.
Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade.

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Tuesday, July 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,lifespan,mom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Genre of this poem is the modified Haiku,7 lines with 7 syllables each
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 07 July 2021

A complete life story in Haiku, terse. Lasaad.5**

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 July 2021

ditto Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2021

A powerful and thought provoking poem. Beautifully crafted. Liked the recurring lines in the opening and closure lines

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Varsha M 20 July 2021

Indeed defining them is very difficult. We are we the unique one. Beautiful. Congratulations POD.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

A perceptive write.... many congratulations! !

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 22 July 2021

Wonderfully and awesomely written poem, with nice looking picture

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2021

A poem if great insight. Congratulations for having this poem as Poem Of The Day.

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Dear Lasaad, the picture added too is very beautiful.

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Heartiest Congratulations! Superb poem that deserves top stars

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Wonderful to see your poem honoured as the poem of the day!

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