Under The Moonlight Poem by Jessica Elizondo

Under The Moonlight

Rating: 5.0


Here we lie on this grassy hill, under the moonlight. You look at me and I can't stop smiling. You say 'baby I love you.' I blush and say 'I love you too.' The moon shines bright, making your beauty even greater. I can't think of ever loving another man other than you. You turn to face me, and I turn too. We stare into each others eyes. I get lost in yours because they're so beautiful, and I truly feel loved, I don't wanna close my eyes, I just wanna stare at you. The night winds pick up and a slight breeze is in the air. I shiver, but I feel your arms wrap around me and my warmth is restored. We still gaze into each others eyes, and still I am as happy as can be. You look into my eyes and say 'Hun I love you and nothing is going to change that, ' You reach out and raise my chin. Our lips gently touch and I can feel they're warmth on my lips. 'I love you too. And nothing will ever change that.' We look up at the stars and a smile appears on my face. I thank God that I've found my love. And as he holds me tight on the grassy, breezy hill side, I know I am truly blessed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a beutiful memory, past, present, and future.i agree with them all (i love it)

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Serenity Prayer 11 June 2008

i love it. you know whats funny? no, not anyones face(all my friends understand what i mean) i dreamed about that once before Caden left. it was really close to that. lol. it made me think of him and smile. thank you for writting this. it makes me miss him alot, but it reminds me of what its going to be like when he gets back. i love it.

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Candice Anderson 11 June 2008

very pretty, cute and romantic. very well written. i loved it

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Marvin Brato 10 June 2008

Truly romantic and passionate write...many could relate to! A 10.

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