Underneath The Wire - Μόνος Ο Ακροβάτης Poem by Kostas Lagos

Underneath The Wire - Μόνος Ο Ακροβάτης

Rating: 5.0


Underneath the wire

An acrobat stargazes

Lonely as a star


Ονειροπολεί

Μόνος ο ακροβάτης

Σαν να'ναι άστρο

Tuesday, December 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not exactly a traditional haiku. Kept the format though
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 December 2020

beautiful imagary Just love it! Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 29 December 2020

Your amazing poem gives an intriguing view of a lonely person.5 stars

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David Wood 30 December 2020

A lovely haiku nevertheless and a good 5*

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Doreen Weinhurst 30 December 2020

Walking on a tightrope.

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Captain Cur 31 December 2020

But who better than an acrobat to risk reaching for the stars. Great poem.

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2020

Simply superb my friend.5**

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 December 2020

A very prudent short work....liked it.5 stars*****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 December 2020

Happy New Year Kostas! May the stars shine bright for all of us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 December 2020

Gazing at the star. That's exactly what an artiste does.

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