Hurting
Hurting so bad
So many...
Suffering.
Made the wrong decision
The wrong choice
Now...
Too late
Can't turn back
One simple action
Now tragic
Unintentional pain
Never..
Never Too heal
Please Forgive
I feel your pain
I ache
The world aches
Unintentional
Gone wrong
Hurting;
Hurting Forever
So... So... Sorry
Please Forgive
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
We all deserve to feel this way. Seems you really do. For most, our own problems seem far more immediate. Like your view of it.
it takes a second to start a mistake, but it takes years, sometimes decade to solve it!
Very poetic. So precise are your expressions. Beautifully done.
Such intense pain... (((hug))) It's never too late until they bury you.
The deep feelings from the core of your heart have flown in the form of this beautiful write.Let us not mind the hurt.We'll learn to forget and forgive.! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!
So well written, mistakes are made by all and feeling the pain from their consequences allows us to learn from them and move on and try to do things better, thats life.
Yes i completely understand this, and how much then we bear the pain that unintentionally introduced to others or to us...yet forgiveness and understanding is only a treatment to soothe a condition, at least_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
feelings poured......really superb friend, so emotional i really loved it... nice work! »so close«