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Unknown Sister

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I asked for a sister and soon after -
You breathed in my mothers womb
The garden of our family seemed to bloom
A Joyous life ahead was what we all assumed.

Alas! To the dawn you never awoke.
How can I possibly remember the face I never got to see?
Tell me, how do I love the one who never got to be?
How do I mourn the death of the one who never knew me?

'Love you ', my unknown sister!
You are an angel in my memory,
You lived a life of darkness, though in a hurry
This bitterness and antagonism, how can i bury?

You Live in my dreams
A life like no one else has ever seen
My stillborn sister we both are akin
In your next birth your luck will surely grin.

Life's a see-saw of joy and pain
And for many, like you, its ceases to begin
Having lost out in the game of life, but deep within
My Portarit of thoughts - a chance to live you deserve to win.

*Not based on authors personal experience


(Written on November 08,2005)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Lubna S. Khan 11 May 2006

it was so nice to read and so painful to understand.

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Cj Heck 14 December 2005

A wonderful poem, Preeti. For someone who didn't experience this, you've done a marvelous job with such a sad subject. The love literally flows through it. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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Nikunj Parikh 09 April 2007

amazing poem.... i dont know how many of ur poems are best... u write wonderful... keep it up..... Niks

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Jibin Joseph 31 January 2007

simply superb............... peace jibin

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Arti Chopra 06 December 2006

beautiful poem Preeti.....seems so very real Arti

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Catastrophe King 06 September 2006

The way you utilise your power of the HUMANE aspect in yourself is just un-matched. How you do visualise and then able to pen those painful moments? This is indeed a skill so rare. I am sure with age you will grow up to make a difference in this world.... and that is waht is important.

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THANK GOD, NOT A PERSONAL EVENT, BUT UNFORTUNATELY, SUCH AN EVENT FOR TOO MANY...YOU'VE CAOTURED THE DEEP[ROOTED SORROW SO WELL....SADLY STELLAR WRITE...10 ''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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