You are like the moon
in the bottom of the well.
Unobtainable.
Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Such incredibly beautiful imagery in this truly outstanding haiku! Love it! And I give it 5 stars, but PH is somehow not posting them. I guess they've gone to the moon. That's one of my favourite songs.
Insightfully and elegantly penned. I like your use of the powerful analogy to drive home the point.
Profound Haiku, dear great Poetess! Just that slightest touch in this great Materpiece. TOP Marks! ToMyFavourites
Ever so Powerfully painted and ever so heart touching! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
p1 a lover's moon can be caught in deep wells of true hearts, the moon is catch between stone walls, in depths at the bottom of a well, on clear nights stars shinning,
I wrote the poems 'Catching A Lover's Moon In Water Wells', 'Deep Wells Of True Hearts', 'Moon Caught Clear Nights' and 'Moon Hidden Behind Sky Cloud Veils', inspired by the poem 'Unobtainable-Haiku' by the poet Rose Marie Juan-Austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-Austin.