Unsaintly Poem by Sathya Narayana

Unsaintly

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(This is a very famous story I heard a long time ago. Many pontiffs used to often quote this.)


Two saints on a long journey
towards some unknown destiny...

On their way they met a pretty houri
at the riverside of Kaveri.

She prayed them humbly
"Oh! Hermits holy! Can you take me
to the other side of this river holy? ! '

The younger saint said with fury
"Don't you see oh lady?
We are saints! Don't touch thy body!

But kind was the older saint:
"Oh! Young lady
ye climb my shoulders! I'll carry"

Crossed the river all the three.
The girl left the company
and the saints resumed their odyssey.

A quiet long walk late,
burst out the young saint:

"That's unsaintly O' brother saint...
how could you carry that lady? "

The older saint smiled and said coolly
"I left her at the banks of Kaveri
Do you still carry her in mind heavily? '

Saturday, January 24, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: lady,saint
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan Macli Borges 27 January 2009

it's a good parable, with concepts i don't carry with me but i know it's everywhere: saint / unsaint; well, i thing we're just humans.....

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Avinash Thakur 27 January 2009

humour, wisdom, satire, all in one. great

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 January 2009

this poem brought smile to my face....very clever Brilliant, sir.

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 January 2009

I have heard this story before. It is the height of wisdom for all young men. GW62

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Carol Rhodes 28 January 2009

In my opinion, kindness should prevail. The older Saint was filled with wisdom and loss of libido, yes? Kindness won out. Yes, his mind could've run wild, but lets hope he was beyond mere human carnal desire. We can shut the steam engine down if we understand our primitive natures. We can act solely out of concern for a fellow earth-mate, regardless of gender. Circumstances must dictate. It is obscene that people must back off from each other because of gender. It is outrageous that a woman's body must be avoided at all costs. When do we grow up and respectfully and consciously act according to and in the the best interests of nature? Thanks for sharing! My best, Carol

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Mamta Agarwal 26 February 2009

this is a famous zen story, often told by Buddha. nicely captured in verse. live in the present and let go of past and unnecessary baggage. mamta

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Gargi Saha 08 February 2009

A VERY INTROSPECTIVE WRITE INDEED! ! ! ! ! !

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Manonton Dalan 29 January 2009

'I left her at the banks of Kaveri Do you still carry her in mind heavily? ” is that so? provokes gentle smile on my face. thanks. md. young saint 'you wish you did'

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Sneha Jain 29 January 2009

a great mix of humor and wisdom... 10

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Ency Bearis 29 January 2009

great concept..youngmans wisdom for very young woman..clever write...

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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