Pale stars break at nights
Falling into the void of nothingness
Much the same as the tears
Rolling down my cheeks
Discovering its place in the
Untold accounts of time
As Iceberg melts and breaks
Into the expanse of the ocean
Depicting the brokenness
Of my barren desolate life.
© Aarzoo Mehek
Depicting the brokenness......significant......thank u....anjandev roy.
Very nice, Arzoo! My poems have finally been activated. Poem Hunter made me wait eight days to activate the first ones!
It is difficult to fathom the depth of your feelings when you take into account the falling stars, tears rolling down the cheeks and the melting icebergs in an effort to find the meaning of nothingness and " the brokenness.... Of my barren desolate life" . An amazing piece of poetry.
They are pearls of your life, someday someone will find it lying in the depth of the ocean of the love. Fantastic poem on pains.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...." As Iceberg melts and breaks Into the expanse of the ocean" . What a sparkling imagery and comparison! The iceberg of pain, the major portion of which is hidden breaks and melts into the ocean of pain. Great poetic expression.....10