Ali Adamson


Unwritten - Poem by Ali Adamson

Red is red
Words are words
Bread is bread

Topic(s) of this poem: sadness


Comments about Unwritten by Ali Adamson

  • Susan Williams (3/18/2017 1:32:00 PM)


    Sometimes the sadness just overwhelms us in a gray world and even doughnuts don't draw- - -nah, doughnuts always make me happy, start my engines, rev my motor. Try the doughnut cure for depression [the non-medical depression]. (Report) Reply

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  • Hans Vr (2/11/2017 9:03:00 AM)


    Heart, mind and body,
    Beautifully and very concisely penned.
    Good!
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  • Saadat Tahir (1/17/2017 1:38:00 AM)

    ...
    a nice small piece with compression of ideas....
    the verse quoted by Akhtar Jawad sb...is apt and a pointer in the right direction.
    what came to my mind after reading your poem...with its start emphasis on RED....
    my mind wandered to bal e jibril....

    jis kheyt se dehkaan ko muyasir nahi rozi..us kheyt k hr khosha e gandum ko jla do
    nice

    liked
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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/3/2017 10:52:00 PM)


    Choolhey ke aag jo jalti huzoor hay......................Jitne hayn khas sabmein yehi khas noor hay (Nazir Akbarabadi)
    Yes, bread is bread, any ism that can provide bread to the poor hungry persons is the best ethics. Just words of promises are not enough.
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  • (12/31/2016 3:34:00 AM)


    Each word in this succinct piece stands for some idea, for a bigger concept n thought. A very clever write that encompasses the essence of life. Without these things, life is hard. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/28/2016 12:58:00 AM)


    I see, red by blood..words for heart and bread to live, still clever... Linguistics can be different way but the enthusiastic of delivering meaning still the same. Now I understand fully... So to educate people, give them bread then say the words.. :) want to add something else? (Report) Reply

    Muhammad Ali (12/28/2016 1:49:00 AM)

    Thanks friend. so to educate people, gives positivity.

  • Unwritten Soul (12/27/2016 9:21:00 AM)


    The meaning is so deep right till the cue is so unwritten by these clues,
    either it was something we can see...like color, red..
    or something we can hear like sound, the words
    or things we can touch and taste, bread..

    i think you pick it right and nice one
    all of these subjects can be unwritten but to perceive
    though we can say the thing is real when it got experienced

    Clever write, because it may look simple but it requires
    thinking and pondering, maybe i was wrong in my interpretation
    but i feel right in my own jugdement, that make me want to say it is a great job!

    So does my Unwritten Soul saying to your art
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    Muhammad Ali (12/27/2016 10:14:00 AM)

    instead of 'read' I wanted to write 'red'

    Muhammad Ali (12/27/2016 10:13:00 AM)

    thanks dear. I want to tell you my point of view, than I require your attention again :) . read is blood. words are soothing elements. bread is the fuel to live. unwritten is this instinct of survival in policies and laws of great mankind. when one is dying due to hunger, he needs bread, not seminars. peace dear

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 26, 2017


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