Worse
It was
To hold,
Worst..
If I told
Nine words! ! ! ! ! ! ! It only took you nine words to expound on the quality of silence in this circumstance. That is an awesome undertaking and you succeeded skillfully. The poem makes the reader pause and consider- -this is no read and walk away poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Misuse of speaking words create venom, it is better to keep silence.
If we hold venom inside against a person, it is harmful, but if we spill out that venom before him, it is even worse....! Such condensed form of worldly wisdom....! Brevity which speaks volumes! Great write!
Valsa G, thanks for your appreciation. sometimes, when venom isn't against someone, it may be just a truth...
Very thought provoking, Ali. Indeed you have captured the nature of venom in these few lines. Its toxicity can destroy the self, or the other. How difficult life becomes when choice is reduced only to being able to decide how and when that harm may manifest. A great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Powerful write, the correctness the sharpness all in this brief poem. So which one you going to tell bcoz either way you suffer... Loved it