Urn Of Encumbrance………silent Shriek Poem by saadat tahir
Urn Of Encumbrance………silent Shriek
Gone with the sun a million years
Ammonia clouds and watery tears
mother earth opens its womb
only to rest uncounted tomb
Dark clouds and monsters sent
To plod its breast and face rent
dream and color doomed to end
dreary black holes light too bend
Adam tossed in swish and milieu
Wanders gossamer and the dew
Laden heaves mosque and pew
Flailing rationed with his few
(Islamabad)
(June 12,2009)
(if the poem is centre justified it will assume the shape of an urn)
Dark clouds and monsters sent To plod its breast and face rent dream and color doomed to end dreary black holes light too bend I am the person who is often gone with the wind.Here I met someone who is gone with the sun...heard his Silent Shriek.....found myself concerned....Thnx for the poem and you must get 10++ for your wide thought process.Luv - Brishti
Good puzzling poem...gives a thing or two to think over on leisurely hours...thanks Saadat...10
Member Ruth Walters 17873256 -.Urn of encumbrance………silent shriek Date & Time: 6/14/2009 6: 35: 00 AM Comment: Hi Saadat, just loved this poem apart from a couple of things that I would like tweaked or didn't understand fully? Please try to explain to me..... (moved to messages-saadat) Ruthy
you have a distinct style, doc...esp. the way your images are presented, are you a painter by any chance?
Your thought pattern and poetic diction are par excellent! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The story of Earth, along with a description of Adam, trying to find his peace in the pairs of opposites, all splttered between the options, a nice poem. Well penned!