Vaulting Memories... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Vaulting Memories...



Right atop the lush green valley
Behold, my aging eyes, a bunch of kites,
Dancing in style and floating high,
They vault into the vast azure sky

I hear children's excited cries,
That rocks the whole place with innocent might
Memories mine now on their flight
Join the past shows in silent delight

23 01 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

nice piece.. love it..

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Tess Bybee 30 January 2009

This is very good, it's a complex idea shaped with few words. That's not something that's easy to do, good job.

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Bob Blackwell 31 January 2009

Kesav, you paint a beautiful picture, memory allows us the luxury of having visited a moment in time, we can have mind paintings of it, for all of time. Bob

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Zaarah Jasmin 31 January 2009

you're really talented poets, great work kesav....thank u for sharing my friend..

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Jayaprakash Panicker 31 January 2009

it is about me childhood days kesav hi i used to fly kites and kites and kites up when they dot the ski in colours different we frolicked and frenzied as if we were heroes it sounds as if you had a childhood the way i had vast paddy fields after harvest scores of chldren from the neighbourhoods summer vacation or some other vacation it was kites all the way up in hte sky

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Wow, so many poet friends who care deeply about you. I hope your heart is Dancing in style and floating high, Vaulting into the vast azurine sky... among the beauty and grace of many other poets and friends.

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Indira Renganathan 11 March 2010

I don't remember if I have already commented on this nor have I patience to check through the comments down but I have pleasure in addressing you 'the wisdom-poet'...yes, you are

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2009

Great poem and nobody had trouble recognizing it as such, I see. Love your description of memories flying into the vault of mind.

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Sebastine Humaemo 08 February 2009

hy dude...yu got me drownd in ma memories while readin this poem....great work...........realistic n creative works are alwys been n ur style......behold my aging eyes a bunch of kites..............lovely line.........admired a lot..i gve yu 10+++ fr this one.......sebastine

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Omar Ibrahim 06 February 2009

i really dont know how to comment about such an awsome poem........i am out of words

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