Cretan Maineiac

Rookie - 4 Points (April 29,1961 / Lewiston, ME USA)

.waking Up - Poem by Cretan Maineiac

We open our
Eyes only
because
God
is giving us
One
More
Chance.


Comments about .waking Up by Cretan Maineiac

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/29/2008 6:46:00 AM)


    Wow what a short and beautiful poem.10+ (Report) Reply

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  • (8/18/2008 4:10:00 AM)


    Short yet so dramatic. Lovely.... (Report) Reply

  • (3/24/2008 2:29:00 AM)


    I'd be waking up but wherehave you been lately? Hope you are well. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2007 11:39:00 AM)


    Sometimes short are better than long, cause its said straight on what its mean...love it thou...thank you very much for sharing.

    Mary
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  • (11/9/2007 10:53:00 PM)


    Short but the words behind it mean so much. *Hugz** CC (Report) Reply

  • Egal Bohen (9/24/2007 10:18:00 AM)


    I like this one a lot!
    Egal..
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  • (8/2/2007 10:46:00 AM)


    Keep writing ones like this, and he'll be giving you plenty more. Loved it.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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  • Elysabeth Faslund (7/9/2007 9:31:00 AM)


    Short, with all the criticism of the world snuggled in between the lines! All the hope of that world too. Oh yeah, you did it again! Put your opponents, if any, down for the count of 8, if they don't believe this one! Well worth the read! ! ! xxElysabeth (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2007 7:43:00 PM)


    nice one
    ..............
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  • (6/18/2007 9:47:00 AM)


    Amen brother.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 11, 2011


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