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.waking Up

Rating: 5.0

We open our
Eyes only
because
God
is giving us
One
More
Chance.

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Coreena Dejesus 09 November 2007

Short but the words behind it mean so much. *Hugz** CC

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Egal Bohen 24 September 2007

I like this one a lot! Egal..

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Anna Russell 02 August 2007

Keep writing ones like this, and he'll be giving you plenty more. Loved it. Hugs Anna xxx

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Elysabeth Faslund 09 July 2007

Short, with all the criticism of the world snuggled in between the lines! All the hope of that world too. Oh yeah, you did it again! Put your opponents, if any, down for the count of 8, if they don't believe this one! Well worth the read! ! ! xxElysabeth

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fanniesson - 21 June 2007

nice one ..............

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2019

A concise and witty verse nicely penned with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing, Cretan.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

Wow what a short and beautiful poem.10+

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Tanya Stanford 18 August 2008

Short yet so dramatic. Lovely....

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Emancipation Planz 24 March 2008

I'd be waking up but wherehave you been lately? Hope you are well.

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Ewigi Liebe 30 December 2007

Sometimes short are better than long, cause its said straight on what its mean...love it thou...thank you very much for sharing. Mary

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