Walk With Me On Sandra's Lonely Moon Poem by Bill Cantrell

Walk With Me On Sandra's Lonely Moon

Rating: 5.0


Walk with me on Sandra's lonely moon
You will find my footprints, I have roamed the barren dunes of sands, in order to find her, I indeed have found her inkwell
It is a red basin filled to the brim with melancholy, I myself have tasted these waters, there are not for the weak of heart, we have both lost loved ones and we attach our loss to this cold hearted orb
On bended knee, I beg you grant me audience,
and accept council for a muse, yes, even a dead one can change when they see a poem that grants them peace, yes, chosen words amounting to either closure or release, and one as powerful as this just might achieve both, I'm sure of it
You have given to the orphan hope, as you have spoken on her behalf, the sun is her dear friend, his silence was his way of giving her time to morn, Also dear Sandra, for times and countless eons, she could not cry
Yet I took it upon myself to read your poem to her aloud, and she wept profusely, I myself chose to stay here for I have concluded this is my time of mourning as I shall live the remainder of my days as it seems we have traded places, so to all readers, this is no ordinary poem that I give tribute for we attach death and loneliness to that by which we have been stricken, Again I beg you take a trip on Sandra's lonely moon

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One of the best poems ever written and acknowledged by Many Elite poets from all over the word, if I could ever write a poem this touching, I would then and only then, consider myself a poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 30 August 2022

Wonderful tribute to one of our finest poetess Sandra. *****

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Richard Wlodarski 30 August 2022

This is such an extraordinary poem. A magnificent tribute to one of Sandra's greatest poems ever! And a testament to the therapeutic value of poetry. To share the great pain and sorrow of losing loved ones through poetry. Hats off to both of You!

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Bill Cantrell 30 August 2022

Thank you Richard, you are kind my friend

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2022

A great tribute to one of the most beautiful poems ever posted on this site. I am very sure many of us will walk with you on Sandra's Lonely Moon. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2022

Beautiful, beautiful poem embellished with crystalline images and magnificent poetic expressions. Liked the title that catches the eye of a reader to go through with this wonderful and touching poem.

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