Captain Cur

Gold Star - 5,182 Points (Born Late 1600's Date of Death Unknown / England)

Waves Of Sunset - Poem by Captain Cur

You are a lot like
summer evening's
warm scented breezes
lingering, lazily lounging
upon the hills of sunset's
arching bands of color
cascading upwards
peeking over the endless ridge,
lavishly captured in the glowing
twilight of your smile
then dispersed
in the whispering waves
of your breath.

Comments about Waves Of Sunset by Captain Cur

  • Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    you are a true artist. great imagery. (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (6/5/2013 9:57:00 PM)

    A really breathtaking poem. Such captivating words
    put together in a deep emotional write. Loved it.
    made me shudder!
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  • Yasmin Khan (5/26/2013 3:18:00 AM)

    wow! I'm a great worshiper of Nature and feel that emotions expressed through her are filled with grace and beauty that touch the heart. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (5/23/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    You paint a wonderful picture with words. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/23/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    A single hit and many strokes, free-verse poetry is a marvel in run on, unpunctuated flow! ! !
    Picturesque! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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