(dedicated to Adeiza Atureta)
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A good advice for those who spent out of their means!
I like the first part, but find the last sentence confusing because it is a double negative and they always confuse me. This is not necessary bad because poetry is meant to get us to think. 'Just don’t start spending what you don’t have'. I guess you mean don't waste your time.
A very nice piece to lest us wake up after being left alone on the WAYSIDE.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.
a small and nice powerful poem.