Winning her heart standing on the open terrace
Enchanting her sweet name in her ears
Landed the vibrant shiver in her
Caught in the mirror carrying above
Obviously surrendering both of us
Mighty strength collapsed
Ecstasy in our eyes filled with glittering shy....
secret romance in the open terrace...your poem transmits lovely feelings...thanks
This is an eastern welcome, very true. Nowadays the fashion is simply saying Hi.Which I like or saying nothing at all.10++
Hope no one is silently watching behind....your writing this can make the reader (especially south indian) visualise a mottai-maadi romance easily...well done
Obviously surrendering both of us Mighty strength collapsed Ecstasy in our eyes filled with glittering shy.....natural physical attraction and enjoyment and feelingshy later on when caught...lovely poem to beenjoyed by young people....10 read mine..love at first sight....friend in mirror...miss i miss you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
another lovely poem from you, lago lago....thanks for sharing....