. What I See In You Poem by Eyan Desir
. What I See In You
I see one rose
That isn't red
A flower called my friend
One special lady
Maybe I am crazy
Nothing is sweeter
Than seeing you smile
It invigorates my life
I see a bottle of wine
With a diamond inside
That brightens my eyes
And makes me wise
Nothing is better
Than seeing you're mine
It stimulates my mind
I see a mountain
With an angel behind
We can't complain
I am one lucky guy
Nothing is lovelier
Seeing you on my side
It feels like paradise
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(Dedicated to Joscelyn Alderdice
(My biggest Fan thank you for reading)
There you go again...all the PH ladies swooning over you! ! Only thing, the names of the ladies keep on changing in every poem. Ah, sailor boy. But all of them lovelies don't seem to mind it either... So, keep on Eyan, keep on (as though you needed the encouragement!) Cheers. Subroto
Nicely scripted metaphors Eyan, a smooth and calming write. Regards Mark
Nothing is lovelier seeing you on my side It feels like paradise. It is very true.
This is SWEET! It s a thing of joy to love and be loved in return... It is even sweeter when appreciated.
wonderful lyric poem, my friend, very well written, lovely to read. 10/10
Exaltation of emotive element …’ I see a bottle of wine/With a diamond inside…’ fantabulous… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 10:57:02 PM # 1.0.0
ok, this is good..good..good