When He Came Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

When He Came

Rating: 5.0

There I was an empty piece of a cocoon
placidly living on my own
without knowing that there were colours everywhere
suddenly... you came...
You brought me out of my world
and took me out to a beautiful garden
hastily bloomed with aromatic flowers
that swayed on the rhythm of the wind.
Before I knew, there I was so in love with you
I love the touch of your zealous hands
that promise to catch when I fall
And whenever I gaze in your fascinating eyes
I can still recollect the vows we made...
to stand by ourselves...
to hang on with our faith...
to love until the end...
We were so blessed when these angels came
They lighted up our home
They brought happiness in our hearts
They taught us to love more
Our life is different from before
and I know my love for you will endure...

11th July 2008

Mark Nwagwu 29 July 2008

Yes, Joan, love brings us out of ourselves and reveals us to ourselves that we may then give of ourself freely to another. Wonderful feelings expressed here. And may the love thrive and endure. Thanks.

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Marvin Brato 29 July 2008

Candid love transcends beyond sensuality, it settles and hold a great family! A 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 July 2008

True Love inspires life to live long.......10+

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

that is really great and im so happy to bring its vote to 10/10, coz now it`s 9.9, so i must rush. be well dear, ur poems r full with special spirit

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Fay Slimm 10 August 2008

Hello Joan. This is a beautiful love poem, well written and speaking of committment. Your happiness comes through. I look forward to more like this, and when you have an even treater grasp of English, in which you are doing very well, you will be able to express yourself even better. Keep on writing. This deserves my ten. From Fay Slimm

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 August 2008

A very nice piece and, i did read your message to me as well.Please, to write more poems and lines that touches many like this poem, YOU NEED TO READ A LOT TOO. Please, do read different ENGLISH books, newspapers, etc from different English speaking Countries to beef you up on this mission.Yes, you have the qualities of a POET.Do not give up and, keep on writing. Do greet the people around you too.Bye. E.K.L.

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Ency Bearis 04 August 2008

Angels inspired our lives...those kids...that's the reason we want to prolong our lives as they inspired us to let them grow...oh little angels.. great write...kabayan... Best Regards, Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 04 August 2008

We were so blessed when these angels came They lighted up our home... good lines these... kids are the real light and happiness in one's life...

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