Jazlle D. H.

Rookie (22nd January / Valenzuela)

When I'M With You - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me what am I thinking
because it would make me cry
to say it's about you and me.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me why I'm not talking
because I couldn't explain
how much you mean to me.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me what I'm about to tell you
because it could hurt me more
to admit I must stop myself in loving you.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me why I'm letting you go
because it would break my heart
to do the right thing and leave the one I love.


(3rd of June 2008)


Comments about When I'M With You by Jazlle D. H.

  • (11/4/2009 1:29:00 PM)


    'To admit I must stop myself in loving you'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (8/30/2008 6:03:00 PM)


    I can totally relate... This is a wonderful poem. I love how you convey such convoluted ideas with simple words. Thanksfor posting and im looking forward in reading your new poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Kali Abyss (8/16/2008 3:09:00 AM)


    This poem is really beautiful...to tears...
    Also like it the last verse =) really good
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/4/2008 3:55:00 AM)


    When I'm with you I beg,
    not to ask me why I'm letting you go
    because it would break my heart
    to do the right thing and leave the one I love.


    ...amazing amazing! ! ....10+++++
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  • (7/9/2008 2:41:00 AM)


    You write very well and I like most of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • (7/6/2008 7:16:00 AM)


    Ah! Cruel Love! This is a beautiful; a poignant piece: -

    all the best!
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (7/6/2008 6:30:00 AM)


    Outstanding poem!
    You write well.
    Thanks for sharing
    Ravi

    Pls read my poem ' There is a song in my heart'
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (7/3/2008 10:35:00 AM)


    lovely love poem.....10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2008 6:24:00 PM)


    I read you poems, this is my favourite..it made me think about some things..
    you are a very good poet.keep it up.
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  • Meer Mushfique Mahmood (6/30/2008 7:30:00 AM)


    I just love this beautiful mind. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2008 2:15:00 PM)


    I know, I understand... You will be ok though... trust me (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 19, 2008



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