Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 485 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

When I Have The Blues - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

No word remains with me
Long enough to call my own
And as soon as it is repeated,
It is forever gone...

If it is my intention,
I might strike the proper note
And set the air quivering
With a heart-ache's antidote...

But love has wings to fly,
Fluttering things take take the sky,
Scarcely a moment on Earth
Dabbling the air with mirth...

Joy will soon run away
And you cannot capture it again
But you may hold in your palm
A feather pricked today...

If love seems out of sight,
Recall a tune or a word,
Sliding down an aura of light,
A melody coming from above...

Comments about When I Have The Blues by Romeo Della Valle

  • Hans Vr (12/15/2011 6:59:00 PM)

    Romeo, this is a masterpiece. I really like the wisdom expressed. Even though things of beauty are transient, we can always hold the feather and the sweet memories of the latest wonderful thing may help us to bridge the gap to the next one. Fantastic write, I like it very. very much. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/9/2011 3:21:00 PM)

    I have reviewed this poem and many more.................

    Words from your heart read deep and true
    They flow from your hand sowing seeds of virtue
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 12:14:00 PM)

    'tis a great poem! !
    Fine and well-suited wording/
    Top marks! !
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  • (12/8/2011 8:38:00 PM)

    Truly stunning, and mind blowing lines.

    'If it is my intention,
    I might strike the proper note
    And set the air quivering
    With a heart-ache's antidote...'

    Incredible write.
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  • (12/8/2011 8:30:00 PM)

    You are a beautiful writer - another wonderful poem. Great work! (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (12/8/2011 6:40:00 PM)

    Very interesting Romeo! Not many people can word it in such a keen
    manner. But then, nothing surprises me anymore with you. You're AWESOME man!
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 9, 2011

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