When I Hurt You Poem by Ayman Parray

When I Hurt You

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When I hurt you I hurt myself
When I touch you I melt
When I love you, I find myself
If I have broken you, I will mend

For you are my heart's desires
My desire to desire
The reason of my reasons
And my reason to be

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When I Hurt You
Saturday, May 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 25 September 2016

someone once said: Don't put all your eggs in one basket. love poems are not my favorite; sorry. : ( maybe it is ONE reason i've been married four times? ? bri :)

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Nosheen Irfan 04 February 2016

Wow. What an expression of love, simple yet powerful. Words coming straight from the heart.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2016

Someone said, Kadi dil na dukhaeen jind meriye ke dilan vitch rub rehnda hay. it's in Punjabi and it means, never hurt a heart, God lives in hearts. Your poem is a touching poem and made a place in my heart, is with the God, I hope God would have appreciated it as well.

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Ayman Parray 24 January 2016

I know God hears and sees all...

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Bharati Nayak 09 August 2015

Love, so pure and so deep, sensitive heart-felt lines'Loved reading your poem.

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Ayman Parray 16 August 2015

Thank you so much Bharati, for your kind words and admiration.

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Ayman Parray 09 August 2015

Thank you Bharti. Love is a great inspiraton

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Valsa George 06 August 2015

Lovely write! What solid convictions and resolutions! Coming from the depths with no artificial embellishments!

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Valsa George 06 August 2015

No one is perfect Ayman..... there is evil in everyone! But once we realize it and get at least fleeting visions of a transformed being, it is such a positive sign! As long as your conscience is sensitive, it will find for itself corrective measures!

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Ayman Parray 06 August 2015

Thank you Valsa. I aspire to be a man of solid convictions and resolutions. I find myself lost in the darkness most times and evil as far as the eye can see. Maybe this is just a glimpse of the man I can be. You are a constant source of inspiration, for both my words and deeds. Thank you once again.

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