When I Look At A Piece Of Paper Comments

An interesting and beautiful poem very well penned.10.

This is wonderful going through all this.

i can see you're experimenting w/ new styles.... good for you...i love the last two lines....

you are so talent kept it up 10++ very lovely and fanastic job

Like many pieces of papers you have used to write countless poems from the bottom of your heart.

when writing... difficult things become much easier

We all need to take a pause and venture on a wise quality leisure time...relax and be happy to what we do making our day end in a smile!

very beautiful and awesome!

This poem is superb..you are really talented...I like this two verses so much'It is necessary to have a courage, To look deep inside myself'....thanks for sharing! ! 10sss

this poem can be modified with better rhyming and separated into stanzas...