When Intimacy Changes Into Indifference Poem by Jasbir Chatterjee

There are many other beautiful and positive things in life, that one should appreciate and enjoy. Cheer up my fellow poet, life comes with its pros and its cons. All we can do, is accept whatever comes our way and carry on. Nevertheless, this is a beautiful poem, technically written. ~Besa

expressing means dealing with it.................... the next step is beyond these words keep on writing keep on living best wishes

I feel the profoundness of this poem in the religious connection that it has to it.

Like the stanzaic balance and repeated mantra like last line

very nice.beautiful style.liked it.

Extra-ordinary depth. Quite imaginative. Slightly emotional. Loved it.

Till subtle changes come bubbling to the surface; When intimacy turns into indifference. Till your close friends just drift away; When intimacy turns into indifference. Realities of life and the life of expectations and sadness.. tony

A highly relatable experience that resonates with me in Toto. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

I relate your 11th line to my personal experiences! A magnificent piece of work.... liked it....10

Cold waves for every heated earth is a must. All colours fade one day. But the fading colour of intimacy hurts. A beautiful way of presenting the slow changing over warmth of relationship. Well done Ma'am. Thanks for the sharing.