Reshma Ramesh

When We Make Love

Baby I lay serene beside you
the only time I feel love so true
as your skin clothe me
thoughts of pleasure run through me.

Your touch makes me all woozy
strong arms warm and cosy
your words randy and racy
things you would do to me sweet n spicy

My breasts crush under your chest
your love the kisses attest
your breath breathing into me
your sweat sweating onto me

Your tongue probes my mouth
as you save me from the drouth
l am myself, pure, pristine, absolute
I am frail, flawed, broken, dissolute

Aquamarine, indigo, sapphire, turquoise
blissful, golden, content, joyous,
passion, love, kama, infatuation
shangri la, nirvana, paradise, salvation


When I feel you cling to me
I am your slave down on my knee
I take you in and pull you out
mind, body and soul devout

Silky hair, waterfalls, ragged breath
soft bosom, love potion, psychedelic
velvet skin, satin rain, racing pulses
entwined bodies, million kisses, fireworks

I sublimate when you move into me
powerful thrusts you get deeper into me
reach a place where no one can ever be
making me complete, beautiful and free.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 20, 2008
Poem Edited: Sunday, May 10, 2009

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  • Ying Escalona (10/5/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    maybe this time, i have to close my eyes, this must be global warming :)

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 11:10:00 AM)

    Brave composition. Nicely written,10+

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  • Dr Yogesh SharmaDr Yogesh Sharma (2/24/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    a great poem written for someone very lucky.love and sex toing together wonderfully.

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  • Sebastine HumaemoSebastine Humaemo (11/20/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    lust n love finely penned....action of love smoothly pictured.....nice....

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  • Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid (11/11/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    Breathless clinging of two flowers!

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  • Roger Cornish (11/4/2008 10:09:00 AM)

    The sentiments and passion can't be argued with....
    The rhyme doesn't suit your style. I like your free stuff better.

    Rx

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  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/23/2008 4:25:00 AM)

    OMG...PASSIONATELY PASSIONATE...

    :)

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  • Pablo Forever (10/3/2008 8:19:00 AM)

    It is beautiful and it does remind me of the moment our fingers find each other....so beautiful

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  • Sunil Uniyal (10/3/2008 3:53:00 AM)

    Love-play beautifully transformed into poetry. Hats off, Reshma.

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  • Vidyadhar DurgekarVidyadhar Durgekar (9/26/2008 12:28:00 AM)

    A poetic statement of bold and beautiful-
    A subject shedding inhibitions and hypocracy
    beautifully transalted with excellent imagery.

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  • June Feir-Cruz (9/25/2008 11:19:00 AM)

    oh, la la Resh! ! ! This is so sexy! ! ! Smolderingly hot. A 10++++

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  • Raj Nandy (9/19/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    Such realism couched in poetic lines, outclass 'Lady Chatterley's Lover', or
    whatever one may have in mind!
    -Raj Nandy

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  • Evolved Indian (9/19/2008 12:33:00 AM)

    very brave attempt n highly successful...
    Sex sans vulgarity...one of the best example

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (9/2/2008 2:56:00 PM)

    Lively........................! thanks

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (9/1/2008 9:40:00 AM)

    wow....wow.....wow.....i loved this one...........so refreshin' n vibratin'. your so skin deep reshma....marvellous!

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  • Blue Eyes (8/25/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    i love poems that has connetative meanings...i loved ur poem.
    it is brave of u to write such a poem

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  • Subbaraman N V (8/25/2008 5:05:00 AM)

    An ennobling write! Congratulations!

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