When We Make Love Poem by Reshma Ramesh

When We Make Love

Rating: 4.8


Baby I lay serene beside you
the only time I feel love so true
as your skin clothe me
thoughts of pleasure run through me.

Your touch makes me all woozy
strong arms warm and cosy
your words randy and racy
things you would do to me sweet n spicy

My breasts crush under your chest
your love the kisses attest
your breath breathing into me
your sweat sweating onto me

Your tongue probes my mouth
as you save me from the drouth
l am myself, pure, pristine, absolute
I am frail, flawed, broken, dissolute

Aquamarine, indigo, sapphire, turquoise
blissful, golden, content, joyous,
passion, love, kama, infatuation
shangri la, nirvana, paradise, salvation


When I feel you cling to me
I am your slave down on my knee
I take you in and pull you out
mind, body and soul devout

Silky hair, waterfalls, ragged breath
soft bosom, love potion, psychedelic
velvet skin, satin rain, racing pulses
entwined bodies, million kisses, fireworks

I sublimate when you move into me
powerful thrusts you get deeper into me
reach a place where no one can ever be
making me complete, beautiful and free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Forever 03 October 2008

It is beautiful and it does remind me of the moment our fingers find each other....so beautiful

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Sunil Uniyal 03 October 2008

Love-play beautifully transformed into poetry. Hats off, Reshma.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 September 2008

A poetic statement of bold and beautiful- A subject shedding inhibitions and hypocracy beautifully transalted with excellent imagery.

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June Feir-Cruz 25 September 2008

oh, la la Resh! ! ! This is so sexy! ! ! Smolderingly hot. A 10++++

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Raj Nandy 19 September 2008

Such realism couched in poetic lines, outclass 'Lady Chatterley's Lover', or whatever one may have in mind! -Raj Nandy

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Ying Escalona 05 October 2009

maybe this time, i have to close my eyes, this must be global warming :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Brave composition. Nicely written,10+

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 November 2008

Breathless clinging of two flowers!

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

The sentiments and passion can't be argued with.... The rhyme doesn't suit your style. I like your free stuff better. Rx

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008

OMG...PASSIONATELY PASSIONATE... :)

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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