Reshma Ramesh

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When You Held Me - Poem by Reshma Ramesh

When you held me,
To your chest,
Arms around
In embrace
Broad shoulders,
Scent so sweet,
There with you
I wanted to
Weep, bundle
Myself into
A heap, joy I
Felt so deep,
My ears against
Your heartbeat,
Our world turned
Into a capsule
That is when
My dear darling,
I was certain
God had heard
My prayer again.


Comments about When You Held Me by Reshma Ramesh

  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    Marvelous poem 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sebastine HumaemoSebastine Humaemo (11/20/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    lines full of meaning and love....thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Rudy Hossam (10/21/2008 5:17:00 AM)

    lovely words with lovely meanings and strong emotions thanks a lot for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • premji premjipremji premji (10/19/2008 7:30:00 AM)

    where there is love, there is faith
    where there is faith, thre is romance
    where there is romance with pure soul
    there is life...body...love..sex..life...
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  • Vidyadhar DurgekarVidyadhar Durgekar (10/14/2008 10:52:00 AM)

    Very high emotional composition.............good*10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/14/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    This poem is short, sensuous and sensible too...but not as fascinating as others I read today..........I give.9 (Report)Reply

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  • Kee Thampi (10/14/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    real shower of lovely feel
    Our world turned
    Into a capsule
    That is when
    My dear darling,
    I was certain
    God had heard
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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/13/2008 2:45:00 PM)

    refreshening ==============================! 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Thad Wilk (10/10/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    A delightful read Reshma! Truly captures - the heart! ! *10*!
    Best wishes!
    Friend Thad
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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/10/2008 3:00:00 AM)

    God! make my embrace as warm as you wish reshma, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (10/10/2008 12:53:00 AM)

    Very touching and real poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Zia Eybers (10/9/2008 9:45:00 AM)

    Gave me a wonderful warm feeling reading your words....sigh....just what I needed. Tx (Report)Reply

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  • C T Heart (10/5/2008 11:20:00 PM)

    a romantic scene of love divine penned well in God's guidance...happy to read this. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 9, 2008


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