When We Make Love Poem by Reshma Ramesh

When We Make Love

Rating: 4.8

Baby I lay serene beside you
the only time I feel love so true
as your skin clothe me
thoughts of pleasure run through me.

Your touch makes me all woozy
strong arms warm and cosy
your words randy and racy
things you would do to me sweet n spicy

My breasts crush under your chest
your love the kisses attest
your breath breathing into me
your sweat sweating onto me

Your tongue probes my mouth
as you save me from the drouth
l am myself, pure, pristine, absolute
I am frail, flawed, broken, dissolute

Aquamarine, indigo, sapphire, turquoise
blissful, golden, content, joyous,
passion, love, kama, infatuation
shangri la, nirvana, paradise, salvation

When I feel you cling to me
I am your slave down on my knee
I take you in and pull you out
mind, body and soul devout

Silky hair, waterfalls, ragged breath
soft bosom, love potion, psychedelic
velvet skin, satin rain, racing pulses
entwined bodies, million kisses, fireworks

I sublimate when you move into me
powerful thrusts you get deeper into me
reach a place where no one can ever be
making me complete, beautiful and free.

Subbaraman N V 25 August 2008

An ennobling write! Congratulations!

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Blue Eyes 25 August 2008

i love poems that has connetative meanings...i loved ur poem. it is brave of u to write such a poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 September 2008

wow....wow.....wow.....i loved this one...........so refreshin' n vibratin'. your so skin deep reshma....marvellous!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2008

Lively........................! thanks

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Evolved Indian 19 September 2008

very brave attempt n highly successful... Sex sans vulgarity...one of the best example

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Ying Escalona 05 October 2009

maybe this time, i have to close my eyes, this must be global warming :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Brave composition. Nicely written,10+

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 November 2008

Breathless clinging of two flowers!

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

The sentiments and passion can't be argued with.... The rhyme doesn't suit your style. I like your free stuff better. Rx

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008


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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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