When You Look At Me Poem by Aqua Flower

When You Look At Me

Rating: 4.4


When You Look At Me

When you look at me
you really are looking at me
not my big brown eyes, not my wavy brown hair
not my unblemished skin
your eyes just stare
deep into my eyes
my soul you see
warmth embellishes me
as your eyes look deeply
you capture me completely
when you look at me
I can see you too
who you are
through and through
it is true our meeting was fate
I say now, you were so worth the wait

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, November 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fate found too late.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 09 November 2018

This was an old poem written when I first met my soulmate. Re-posting this poem and reminiscing of the days when I wrote this. Aqua Flower

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Matthew Holloway 22 November 2018

really like this and miss such looks. the eyes can offer up so much magic and beauty

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2018

A real look in someone reaches the deepest portion of someone's heart.

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Aqua Flower 21 November 2018

Thank you Akhtar for your comment. This was written for a very special person in my life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 November 2018

A beautiful poem on love that holds us spellbound. A great remembrance and lovingly penned for a soulmate.10

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Aqua Flower 18 November 2018

Spellbound is a great description of being with one's soulmate. Thank you for this lovely comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 November 2018

A lovely poem indeed. The first meeting of lovers is so enchanting. 'who you are through and through it is true our meeting was fate I say now, you were so worth the wait'..is so nice. Enjoyed.

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Aqua Flower 09 November 2018

Thank you for reaading this Very happy you enjoyed it.

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Susan Lacovara 09 November 2018

Funny how an old love can come back to your mind and heart...the walk down memory lane. Lovely piece and I can appreciate a heart remembering! PEACE.

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Aqua Flower 09 November 2018

Reminiscing about old love makes us feel young and alive! Thank you for your comment Susan!

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