Dee Daffodil


Where The Mountains Meet The Sea - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Yes, I know,
It was inevitable.

Even though,
We love each other,

We know,
We really, must soon go.

So, we'll part our ways,
And lives our lives alone.

You feel at ease on a mountain top,
But I prefer a sandy beach.

You like the mountain air,
I prefer a salty breeze.

And so it is, that you must go,
Where tall trees grow and rivers flow.

And I in turn, will go my way,
Where seagulls soar over a sunlit bay.

Perhaps, someday, we'll meet again,
And talk of happy times.

Where salty breezes sway tall trees...
And the mountains meet the sea.

-Written by Dee Daffodil (H.W, July 6,1982)


Comments about Where The Mountains Meet The Sea by Dee Daffodil

  • David Threadgold (9/17/2008 2:22:00 PM)


    Hi Dee. Theres always a chance of meeting again werever it may be. Thanks for the read Regards Dave T (Report) Reply

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  • (8/1/2006 8:28:00 AM)


    A little bit of wistfulness in facing the truth, this is a graceful write. The final lines provide the perfect end/beginning... Esther: ] (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2006 10:50:00 PM)


    wow...this is your best so far...diehard romantic...thats dee daffodil...just like your name...lovely...love..nalini (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2006 5:09:00 PM)


    very romantic. i was reading some other poems you've written, i like them a lot. you're a great poet.
    leo
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  • (5/29/2006 8:47:00 PM)


    What a romantic poem. Even if it is sad......the romance is very powerful and you can't help but root for these lovers. Another beautiful poem! Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/28/2006 2:23:00 PM)


    DEE...BEAUTIFUL, VERY WELL WRITTEN WORK...HOW 'BOUT SOME MORE DAFFODILS FOR OUR GARDENS, DEE? ...PICK-UP THAT PEN YOUNG LADY & SHARE THE GOLD! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2006 8:21:00 AM)


    this too is very beautiful...you are strong, able to make such choices....love, nalini. (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2006 7:18:00 AM)


    Beautiful, great imagery and flow with an economy of words. Very impressed. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2006 3:14:00 PM)


    Loved the flow and rhythm here Dee, a tale of love divided, two viewpoints clearly seen. Kind regards, Justine. (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2006 9:06:00 AM)


    I have known such wistful longing... of facing the inevitable. I like this poem, Dee.

    dan
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  • (5/5/2006 9:50:00 AM)


    Absolutely amazing, no choice but to give you a 10!
    Love Aisha
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  • (5/4/2006 6:47:00 PM)


    Beautiful imagery from a fine writer of words, Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (5/4/2006 9:32:00 AM)


    Dee, an amazing poem with a beautiful ending! Well done! !
    Brian
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 4, 2006



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