Where do I live, you ask me?
I live by the sea
On a mountain
In the trees...
In my house, in a home
wherever, I choose to roam
I live free, yet confined
By the corners of my mind
My body stay in one place
While my mind is in another
Yet my spirit goes
Wherever it damn well chooses
But my soul...
That I take with me
Wherever I go
And that's where I live
And can be found...
Find my soul...
And you've found me
Dee Daffodil (HW) 31 January,2007
A poem loaded with truth and enhanced, as it should be, by it's light hearted tone. I loved it. Ez
what a piece of wonderful written poetry. and very true, nicely said, i really loved this one.
Just beautiful Dee. A wonderful write and a wonderful read. A flowing poem of distinction. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
my mind is like that...sometimes. when i have my mind on my woman, my body gets jealous... so i send my body to help out. i guess my imagination liiiives everywhere.
Hi Dee. I agree everyone should go where they please even if only in their dreams. Great poem thanks **10** Regards Dave T
A poem we can all relate to, I'm sure. You've worded this well, Dee. The imagination can run off to anywhere it wants to. Get the kettle on, I'm coming over for an imaginary chat! Love, Frannie xxx
A wonderful poem Dee, I have to agree..................All the best, Diane
A struggle between out-of-body and in-body? Which is preferable, and which is more accesible to others? For a short poem, this skillfully raises more than one issue, and deals with them cleanly with all the words. Though, for you, it's a subject that'll never be QUITE resolved... S x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dearest Daffy Dee: How I love this work...for it is a pleasure to be reminded that I don't have to be confined in one place. My heart and mind can take me places all over the world, while my body is here, and, best of all, my soul is always my own. Love this poem!