Where You Are Poem by Asif Baloch

Where You Are

Rating: 5.0


For whom are you searching
no one is here
to gather your shatered dreams
and wipe off your tears

I searched the mountains
I searched the plains
I searched the jungles
I even searched you in the rain
I feel you next to me
but I'm unable to see
where you are

I tried to reach the sky
I asked the moon, who
plays seek and hide
I saw you in stars disguise
I felt you in the
first dew of rise
but still i could not find
where you are

in the songs sung by birds
in the flower ready to bloom
in the essence of musk
in the trees swaying with breeze
I saw you fade in my dreams
where you are

Thus now,
my body has become weak
my eyes are blinded and tired
my wishes are unfulfilled
my hopes are shatered
my heart,
Alas! my poor heart
pierced and inside dies
I tried and tried
but could not find
just these words has become
my companion for life
where you are

where you are? ? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 23 February 2009

I like these lines: I even searched you in the rain I tried to reach the sky I asked the moon, who plays seek and hide in the songs sung by birds in the flower ready to bloom in the trees swaying with breeze

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Bradley Little 22 February 2009

this poem of yours is by far my most favorite I loved this poem great job Asif Baloch

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 February 2009

touching piece....fine flowing....poetic... endless searching.....wonderful imagery expressing a hollow heart trying to find the love.... wonderful share.....hope you can take a glimpse on my ' WHY' ....a heart that has the same quest until....she found the feeling.. thanks for sharing...10++

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the heart knows no boundaries in its quest. i loved this one!

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Dr Kamran Haider 19 February 2009

I tried to reach the sky I asked the moon, who plays seek and hide I saw you in stars disguise I felt you in the first dew of rise but still i could not find where you are Wah Asif Bhai Wah... Loved it... Soo wonderfully written and emotions flow intensely preserving the rhythym... Sadness, severance and excruciating pain... I can feel this poem flowing through my heart and eyes... Well done... +++ 10

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

I searched the mountains I searched the plains I searched the jungles I even searched you in the rain I feel you next to me but I'm unable to see where you are Rachel Ann Butler

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Obed Souza 31 July 2009

Beautiful poem! The search is always inward! Sometimes what we look out of us is hidden deep in ourselves. You are a good writer.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 May 2009

Where is she I don't know dear friend. Search inside... Nice love poem. Love with 10.

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Naidz Ladia 24 March 2009

searching in all parts of the world? uhum, , , how sweet it is...where are u? ....wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll, , , wait.........................am just hereeeeeeee......

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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